Thursday, March 18, 2010
Feedback for Vagabond
It is quite clear that Vagabond has a strong, well-established understanding of the theorists, and I was quite impressed by their ability to demonstrate this comprehension. I think their writing is extremely insightful as exemplified by their ability to make connections between theorists (as demonstrated by the Marx and Althussar post) as well as their ability to pull in quotes not only by the theorist at hand but also by other theorists we have studied. Likewise, Vagabond’s content is solid for not only does it address one of the issues at hands but it also relates and makes connections to similar topics. I think my favorite part of their writing was the fact that he/she often pulls in real life applicable examples that anyone can connect with (the DisneyWorld/Victoria Secret references), and thus, puts the sometime vague, unclear discourse into human terms. Their style is quite conversational (not a bad thing!) and allows for easy understanding by the reader. I also enjoy how he/she often proposes their own personal questions in relation to the text because it proves their understanding of the material. If I was to make any sort of suggestion, I think it would simply have to be providing a bit more depth towards their arguments. Although the main point is there, I think the response would be even better if it was expanded upon for a bit more clarification. Also, just make sure the posts are in on time! All in all, great job and thanks for your ideas!
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