Thursday, March 18, 2010

Feed back for Devon

First of all, you write very well. Your style is clear and sharp. I feel like you understand the theorists and theories well and your comments are always very developed. I like that you use examples from your personal experience or also take elements from class discussion or text and related to real life. It seemed to me like you were constant in you blogging and do not need to worry about delayed posts much.

You use quotes well and integrate them nicely in your analysis but you could do that even more. To be honest you are a good blogger and I it is hard to give you advice because I think you do a really good job. The only thing I could say is that maybe you could comment on peoples post sometimes too, to alternate and give your opinion on what other classmates have to say.

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